NYT 3:36 (pannonica)
LAT 3:55 (pannonica)
CS 5:27 (Sam)
Jim Peredo’s New York Times crossword — pannonica’s review
Don’t know why, but I’m feeling quite wiped out this evening. Good thing this puzzle was Monday easy. And on a Monday, too!
The theme here is, erm, metallic things?
- 17a. [Result of tanning] BRONZE SKIN. People who refresh themselves with iced tea while worshipping the sun of course have bronzed skin.
- 28a. [Generous spirit, metaphorically] HEART OF GOLD. |Insert Neil Young link here.|
- 44a. [Hit 1980s exercise video] BUNS OF STEEL. Is that what it was?
- 58a. [Baldie’s nickname] CHROME DOME. I would have gone with the spelling “Baldy’s,” but I wonder if this sort of thing constitutes derisive language for the follically-challenged population. The way some people can get up in arms about height, weight, and depth.
So. GOLD is an element, a metal. So is CHROME, although it’s more accurately chromium, and CHROME plating is more of a thing. Both BRONZE and STEEL are alloys, the former with copper (element, metal) as the defining part, the latter with iron (element, metal). What to make of this assortment, then? Should we relax our standards, be more malleable, because it’s “just” a Monday offering? I don’t know. What I do know is that I did indeed find the variation—which is not even consistent in its diversity—distracting as I was solving, despite being less than fully awake and perceptive. “AWK-WARD!” [Singsongy comment in a sticky situation]. (7d)
What else? Let’s see…
- With most of the letters in place, I put OTTOMAN in at 35-across, but MOOF made no sense. A quick look at the clue [Citizen of Canada’s capital] encouraged me to give that M a 180° rotation.
- I KID, AS IF, TAG UP, A SAD, –HUR, LOOK TO, E FOR, ERA OF. SO-SO? ¡SÍ, SÍ!
- Oh wait! I just noticed that the longish downs are also theme answers!
- 3d. [What a tyrant rules with] IRON FIST.
- 38d. [Speed demon] LEADFOOT.
- Well, these two are both metal elements, and as mentioned earlier, IRON is a component of STEEL. The inconsistency widens. Or perhaps the theme is extraordinarily PLIANT. (8d)
- Other long downs (longer than the two vertical themers) are the lovely FLYING CAR and “I AM SO DEAD.”
- WOOF, YOWL, MOO! (36d, 19a, 41a)
- WAS and LES as FITBs? There are enough of them already in this puzzle, so these just feel gratuitous. (21a, 6d)
You guessed it, SO-SO puzzle (at best).
addendum: I’ve just noticed, in reviewing the published post, that all of the theme answers include an anatomical component, but even this extra dimension doesn’t feel so sure-footed to me, since DOME—and to a lesser extent BUNS—are essentially metaphorical. SKIN, HEART, and FOOT are first and foremost body parts, and FIST falls somewhere else entirely, as it’s a modified hand. Still SO-SO.
Sarah Keller’s CrosSynergy/Washington Post crossword, “Getting in the Last Word”- Sam Donaldson’s review
Look carefully at the ends of the four theme entries and you’ll find synonyms for “state” or “tell:”
- 17-Across: The [Rocky Mountain high point] is PIKE’S PEAK, hiding “speak” at the end.
- 27-Across: PEANUT BUTTER is the [Bread spread] (“utter”).
- 48-Across: The [Renowned Scottish-born chef] is GORDON RAMSAY (“say”).
- 63-Across: [Jack’s ladder] is a BEANSTALK, hiding “talk.”
Fans of consistency will KVETCH that the “tell word” is buried within one word three times and spans two words once. But this is just quirky enough that I like it. It reminds me of a puzzle I constructed when I first started this hobby–the theme involved hidden vehicles at the ends of words, so I had STAR-STRUCK (“truck”), SOMNAMBULANCE (“ambulance”), ED SULLIVAN (“van”), and more. The puzzle was rejected three times by three different editors, each with different reasons. I took that as a sign that maybe it sucked, so I round-filed it. I’m too embarrassed to go find it now just because I know it will be awful even though at the time I was quite proud of it. So since this puzzle reminded me of that early effort, I have a soft spot for it. Yes, there’s SNEE, AVES, VOA, RTES, GEOM, and other sub-optimal items in the fill, but it’s fun to see this twist on the hidden word gimmick.
Favorite entry = STOP THAT, another way to say [“Cut it out!”]. Favorite clue = [Rock cover?] for PAPER. Do Lizard or Spock beat Rock too?
Brendan Quigley’s blog crossword, “Themeless Monday”
Happy fourth bloggiversary to Brendan!
Lost the ability to understand Brendan’s clues this morning. Was stumped and stymied all over the place! Toughest themeless I’ve seen in the past week, and that includes the Newsday “Saturday Stumper.” In the upper right corner, I filled in so many wrong answers. IN A TUX for IN A TIE. AXE for STP. ERRATA for ERRORS. SEXED for SLEPT ([Went undercover?]). TRITT for RAITT. Gah!
Also assumed [It has a very famous shower] meant the time of year when there are meteor showers. I tried LATE AUGUST and LATE SUMMER before the BATES MOTEL finally clawed its way into the puzzle.
Lots of just-plain-tough clues, too. Didn’t have any idea that the clues for EMU, ALPS, and ROTC were taking me in those directions.
Fave fill: TRIM DOWN or TOUCH UP with Photoshop, your call. Sweet SUGAR PIE and the AMARETTO in a sauce for berries at my sister’s house yesterday. SYFY CHANNEL. OUTSIDE HELP. FANFIC atop TWEAKY. HEY JUDE atop SCARE QUOTE. The BATES MOTEL, WITHOUT EQUAL. BALLED-UP Kleenex. (Didn’t notice the inoffensive UP dupe.)
Meh: UNCLOSE, ENE, ROUE, ENYA, IGA, plural OEDS.
What is this CASH CARD [Plastic accepted at the iTunes store]? Just a debit card? Or something newfangled?
Four stars of toughness.
Diane Upchurch’s Los Angeles Times crossword — pannonica’s review
Only three theme answers, but they’re each 15 letters long. The gimmick is a homophone in the last spot.
- 19a. [Dreary late fall forecast] CLOUDY AND CHILLY.
- 37a. [Food truck order] HOT DOG WITH CHILI, aka chili dog.
- 50a. [South American seaport] VALPARAISO, CHILE, which is a nifty fifteen, but in my experience the country is usually pronounced \ˈchi-lā\ though m-w lists the \ˈchi-lē\ variant first.
I was going to knock the theme for the weakness of that last one, but it would seem that I’m on shaky ground there. So I can’t give it the chilly scapula on that score. Nor can I on another, because the ballast fill is good, with decent long downs (HARSHEST, OCCUPIED) and a relatively low CAP Quotient™ .
The cluing is straightforward rather than playful or precious, which is typical for an early week offering. The fill is not exactly Scrabbly—no X, Q, or J, for instance—but again this isn’t unusual for a puzzle in this day slot.
Spot-on Monday crossword.
NYT: I think I liked it better than you did, Pannonica, and thought of the theme as metallic body parts, both components being broadly defined. Six theme answers is pretty darn good for a Monday!
The inconsistency that I wondered about had to do with the structure of the theme answers. Most were Metal- Body Part: IRON FIST, LEAD FOOT, CHROME DOME, BRONZE SKIN. Then there were two that had a different structure: HEART OF GOLD AND BUNS OF STEEL. On the positive side, these latter two were centrally located, so I thought that was OK in the end.
Imagine a creature made up of all these elements!
Favorite clue/answer: AWKWARD!!!
We don’t have to imagine a metalic hybrid human. It’s already been done for us, to a T, in the form of Robert Downey, Jr. as The Iron Man.
I thought the theme was quite inconsistent, but the fact 6 theme answers were included made the situation more forgivable. One aspect you didn’t mention was that IRON FIST and HEART OF GOLD (and possibly LEAD FOOT) are metaphors that describe an attitude and not an actual physical description like the others.
Then again, getting 6 reasonable Metal+Body Part phrases, and to make them fit, deserves some appreciation.
Hi folks! I’m very happy to be making my NYT debut today. Alas, it’s a bit bittersweet.
I have to agree with pannonica. The puzzle has inconsistencies and is just SO-SO.
When I submitted the puzzle, the theme clues were tied together in a playful way by referring to a fictitious robot. Unfortunately, my cutesy cluing had to be straightened out to suit a Monday audience, thereby losing some of the sparkle.
Here are the original clues and their answers:
“Robot’s tanned exterior?” BRONZE SKIN
“Robot’s fluid pumper?” HEART OF GOLD
“Robot’s seating area?” BUNS OF STEEL
“Robot’s shiny noggin?” CHROME DOME
“Robot’s ruling hand?” IRON FIST
“Robot’s pedal pusher?” LEAD FOOT
If those clues had been acceptable for a Monday, I think they would have:
* made it obvious which entries were theme entries (including the vertical ones)
* made it obvious that there were two parts to the theme (metal and body part)
* made the inconsistencies in metal and body parts more forgivable (I hope)
* provided a fun Frankensteinian image of a mashed-together robot
My other favorite clues that didn’t make the cut were:
“Bill Clinton felt yours” PAIN
“Braff or Galifianakis” ZACH (nothing cutesy here, I just like saying “Braff or Galifianakis”)
“Singsongy statement in a sticky situation” became “Singsongy comment in a sticky situation”
“Where clothing was invented?” EDEN
Clearly, my cluing is on a Wed/Thu level while my theme ideas are on a Mon/Tue. The same thing happened with my LAT debut of 7/17/12. One of these days I’ll get them married up. I’m still learning the ropes.
As far as the grid, I was really pleased with the symmetry of the four NW/SE entries and the two central “OF” entries. I did realize that I had some longer non-theme downs, but I thought that since I had clued all the themes consistently (as I had clued them) and FLYING CAR and I AM SO DEAD are totally awesome, that they might pass muster. They did. Barely.
All in all, I’m very happy to be “on the board”. I’ve learned some lessons and will keep plugging away and (hopefully) improving.
Jim: Your submitted cluing gives a nice glimpse into your intended theme, and it connects the dots a bit. Great job in getting your first NYT, I don’t think anyone wants to take away from the fact it’s a special achievement. I agree the other longer answers were nice, especially with a 9-year old seemingly going on 18, I’m dreading the day she pulls stunts that make that phrase a part of the vernacular. Keep it up Jim!
Jim, your clues were so much fun! I liked them better than the final ones. And if it’s any consolation I did imagine such a creature (see my comment from last night).
The Clinton clue may be was fated to be changed :)
Great inaugural puzzle!
I also like your version more… Reminded me initially of a puzzle that had LILYLIVERED and other participled(?) organs; I can’t remember who by or where…
I agree with Huda and Gareth. And the Clinton clue is great!
Also, I apologize for being not completely on-the-ball when I did the write-up, only discovering the puzzle’s theme piecemeal.
NYT: you forgot to add BAABAA when listing those animal sounds pana. ;)
In my opinion, a perfect Monday puzzle. Great theme, great fill, fun clues. All of the answers of six or more letters are great, so who cares about a few duds in the shorter ones? Those are just holding the puzzle together.
The dogcow says MOOF!
Todd wins Nerdiest Pop Culture Reference of the Day.
SO not SO SO!!!
Very alive and chatty, you could “hear” half the answers.
Not perfect consistency, but dense theme, colorful phrases and lots to singsong about!
And yes, Todd, MOOF!
Pannonica, I really like your review of the LAT, principally because I agree with every word.
Amy, are we going to get a review of Sunday’s Reagle, or is it lost forever in the world of TBA?